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DIDN'T I SAY (Free verse) by massangel62

didn't I say I loved you didn't I say I cared didn't I say forever I'd be waiting for you right here you didn't take me seriously you thought it was a lie how can I prove to you that my love will never die just open up your heart open your eyes and you will see that everything I said to you I meant it, seriously.

nentwined 19-Feb-07/3:51 PM
Maybe you have different definitions of love. It's a sentiment, but doesn't do so well as a poem.




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