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Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) (Free verse) by Phalkon

Sir magnedrol, fiercest of all was he Accused in the court of heresy Exiled from the kingdom long ago 'twas not to return for a decade or so out on the land, would sir magnedrol live befriended a farmer, and crops would he give for protection, sir magnedrol, he would provide but the winter was harsh, and the old farmer died sir magnedrol went for a walk one day befriended a traveler on the way the traveler's name was pondrine (pon-druh-nee) a superior hunter and archer was he entering town, some news was told the princess was stolen by a dragon of old for the dragon's death, reward be paid and a high ranking noble, the warrior be made sir magnedrol turned to his partner abreast, and pleaded that pondrine join on the quest the knight and the archer embarked that day for the dragon they sought lived far away the knight and archer, with sun to their back came to the mouth of a forest so black they entered the forest, and they went on for the port at the end had boats sailing on they made up a camp with the fading of light unbeknownst to them, there was thief in the night the archer and knight were awoken to grief for a ravenous wolf was attacking the thief! The knight and the archer jumped to the fight For they could prevent this man's death tonight! The sure-shotted archer, he readied a dart Pulled back on the bow, and struck the wolf's heart The thief was so thankful, he begged to repay So the archer and knight, he would help on the way The trio of friends slept soundly that night They did, that is, until the morning light With the dawn of the sun, they awoke with a hop To the sound of a woodcutter's "chop chop chop" the woodcutter found the travelers three And asked "wilt thou have breakfast with thee?" The woodcutter lived on the top of the hill And made sure the travelers each got his fill At this time, the cutter introduced himself "taeks, am I" as he reached for a shelf (tay-ex) "I am magnedrol" said the fierce knight to the host "and I am pondrine" spoke the archer with boast the thief was reluctant to give out his name "I'll keep it a secret, if it's all just the same" the knight told the cutter of the quest he was on by noon the next day, the four men were gone the port was positioned at the mouth of the bay with a handful of luck, they'd be there in a day bright the next morning the men reached then port the sight they beheld was the busiest of sort they found them a sailor of dirtiest mouth he said he would help them, for he headed south taeks spoke to the sailor on the voyage that night he spoke of the quest and the dragon they'd fight the sailor said, "morth, the sea dog am I, "I've never seen a dragon with this salty eye "from this day on, I'll join on your quest "I may not be much, but I'll give it my best!" so on the boat sailed, in water so deep in the cabin, five travelers, trying to sleep around midnight that night, they awoke with a start a sea creature was tearing the boat apart! With mouth of sharp teeth, and arms of eight feet This terrible creature would be hard to beat! Taeks picked up his axe, and the archer his bow Ready to inflict a damaging blow The thief grabbed his dagger, the knight grabbed his sword But the creature was determined to knock them off board! An arm grabbed the archer, who let out a cry He thought at that point that he'd surely die The knight and the thief both heard the shout They ran to the rescue, to help their friend out They were afraid that their friend had met harm So the knight swung twice, and cut off the beast's arm Taeks the cutter swung with all of his might Struck the beast's head, and the beast died that night! So the boat sailed on for a night and a day The five became brothers along the way The bond they made was the strongest of sort By late afternoon, they had reached the next port The thief and the archer went into town The cutter and sailor tied the boat down The knight stayed aboard, to fix the ship's hull Then cleaned off the weapons (the beast made them dull) The thief and the archer were buying supplies When a ruckus erupted that caught the pair's eyes A man had screamed he was falsely accused This man the guards captured was being abused! The pair then decided to help the man out They caught some attention by giving a shout The thief rolled a casket of wine at a guard The archer hit another with a fruit that was hard The pair freed the man, and ran off like a race But they needed to hide, for the guards picked up pace The man explained that a merchant had lied So the thief found them alleys and places to hide Some time went by, and the guards lost track Decided to give up, and headed on back The trio regrouped, and returned to the ship Ready to begin the next leg of the trip The man introduced himself to the rest "I am aark, the blacksmith, and I'll help on your quest (ay-ark) "I'll sharpen and shine your weapons of steel "I'll cook us a feast for every meal!" "helpful you are, helpful indeed "you are exactly the man that we will need! "if you help us, then we'll help thee!" all of these words spoke pondrine this is the end of part one of the quest you must stay tuned to learn of the rest the adventures thus far have been but the least will the travelers strength be enough for the beast?

SupremeDreamer 9-Feb-07/1:08 PM
Your efforts, sir, fall on blind eyes, deaf ears, and this young mans collapsed rectum. You had been too kind.




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