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HELP (Free verse) by LIL ZAY

LORD I FEEL IM TO DEEP IN THIS GAME EVERYDAY IT FEELS LIKE IM GOING INSANE I TRY TO DO RIGHT BUT IM SURROUNDED BY WRONG I CAN'T GET SLEEP AT NIGHT CAUSE IM WATCHING MY HOME YOU SAID ASK AND YOU SHALL RECEIVE WELL LORD I'VE CRIED,BEGGED,AND PLED I DON'T WANT TO LIVE THIS LIFE NO MORE BUT IT SEEMS LIKE YOU CLOSED AND THE DEVIL OPEN THE DOOR YOU SAID I HAD A ANGEL WALKING WITH ME 24HRS A DAY WHAT'S WRONG WITH MY ANGEL DO HE NOT KNOW WHERE I STAY

balthazar 13-Sep-02/1:23 PM
i agree, there's no way this is a 0. it has a very jazz age-harlem renaissance feel to it. like a streak from Ellison's Invisible Man.




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