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Stained (Free verse) by fadedlove

and so ill bite off my nails cut off my tear stained sleeve ill swallow all these pills though the pain, they wont relieve ill throw away my mascara because it never stays on and ill unplug the phone because it never goes off

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Jan-07/10:55 AM
This so effortlessly achieves the vague air of guffing claptrap that wheezes out of all good poetry. Sublimely beautiful. A triumph. You have talent: use it.




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