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almost 12.30 (Free verse) by Dental Panic

and Walter is reading words off billboards: GIVE. BE. SLIP. FIT. Sure, he wants to but in a minute the bus arrives from Old Sincere and his mother is on it with a suitcase full of facts, dad’s remorse, jacket prayers and a glass for denture bits.

Stephen Robins 19-Jan-07/8:44 AM
Powerful use of overture, with a fission of piquant denotation. It starts as a veritable romp around avenue failure before firting with the bridge of disaster only to be swept along by a torrent of unutterable excellence.




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