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He's... (Other) by holliebollie_19

Everday I sit and wait, Only to get a date, Why should I try, All I want to do is cry, The guy I like, Thinks I need to take a hike, I try not to care, But he's always there, Everyday and night, We have never had a fight, A friend says we're perfect together, I know I shouldn't even tried to bother, Everyone think we shouldn't be togeter forever, But I think not, Although he's really hot, He's all I got, That's atleast what I thought, He's easy to read, He's like a book, He's a stude, So because of that; you have to look, Because he's not a dud, I like him a lot, And he's really really hot, He's the best, And better than the rest, He is great, Even if I don't get a date.

Ranger 18-Jan-07/9:05 AM
Couple of typos in here need fixing.

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