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HELP (Free verse) by LIL ZAY

LORD I FEEL IM TO DEEP IN THIS GAME EVERYDAY IT FEELS LIKE IM GOING INSANE I TRY TO DO RIGHT BUT IM SURROUNDED BY WRONG I CAN'T GET SLEEP AT NIGHT CAUSE IM WATCHING MY HOME YOU SAID ASK AND YOU SHALL RECEIVE WELL LORD I'VE CRIED,BEGGED,AND PLED I DON'T WANT TO LIVE THIS LIFE NO MORE BUT IT SEEMS LIKE YOU CLOSED AND THE DEVIL OPEN THE DOOR YOU SAID I HAD A ANGEL WALKING WITH ME 24HRS A DAY WHAT'S WRONG WITH MY ANGEL DO HE NOT KNOW WHERE I STAY

poetandknowit 13-Sep-02/10:37 AM
Hey, who gave this a 0. I kind of like it, minus the caps, but maybe he is hard of hearing from the mortar fire.




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