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Mermaid at Dawn (Free verse) by <~>

After 3, in the middle of the night I gave myself away You saw through my skin Your out to my in, swimming so hard against this softness. We were awake beyond sensation, but dumb to anything but the hum within. We made our reciprocal dive, wetted down and so well suited. Quivering, I recall those moments of focused clarity, synchronized like breathing exercises fueling our endurance. I saw the instant of unity slip when, entwining beyond limbs, or minds, we claimed the sunken treasure cried out as one and exhausted released each other, came up for air. Before 7, An aching in my eyes-- am I a fool or did we embrace some elusive truth in the hour before the first bird broke the night with a song for himself?

poetandknowit 13-Sep-02/10:34 AM
Look Frass , I back everything up with my writing. You should try that. And you don't goad me, I am like this to everyone, although I must say on good days I suck up to GW, only because I cannot get that cupping out of my head. And I continue to give you insight into my behavior but you cease to adhere to it. If I am a roach to this site here is the explanation: Have you ever been a writer, made you living at it. Well Frass it is hard work, fucking hard work and when you sit in a chair for 15 hours a day because you have constant deadlines and the travel schedule is on hold until you finish what you started, well it gets lonely, minus my loving dogs, and the mail woman is tired of talking to me!!! So there, it beats staring out the window. Are you really that much of a nimcompoop?




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