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Mermaid at Dawn (Free verse) by <~>

After 3, in the middle of the night I gave myself away You saw through my skin Your out to my in, swimming so hard against this softness. We were awake beyond sensation, but dumb to anything but the hum within. We made our reciprocal dive, wetted down and so well suited. Quivering, I recall those moments of focused clarity, synchronized like breathing exercises fueling our endurance. I saw the instant of unity slip when, entwining beyond limbs, or minds, we claimed the sunken treasure cried out as one and exhausted released each other, came up for air. Before 7, An aching in my eyes-- am I a fool or did we embrace some elusive truth in the hour before the first bird broke the night with a song for himself?

Frass 13-Sep-02/10:22 AM
How deliciously satisfying; two of the skankier site roaches yammering at me at once from their shat smeared lairs. I draw ya'll out with my intentionally foppish pedantics so that I can put the heel to you once more. A few of you--Dunkeles Engel, PAKI, Dylm, H8, etc., ad nauseum--have made a choice to emit your bilgewater in an attempt to swamp the vast majority of us who choose to enjoy this very fine site. I choose to goad ya'll like a picador every chance I get; doesn't mean I hate ya'll, just means I enjoy delivering the jabs you so richly deserve.




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