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portrait of powerlessness (Free verse) by digipoet

i bleed draconian sorrow toes trembling fingers forgotten my heart screams to you and at you shame, secrecy, sadism

LilMsLadyPoet 11-Jan-07/7:15 PM
I see you, Alchemy have not forgotten the one you were so venomous and combative toward...what, did you miss the sparring? It is rather amusing our scores matched...I am surprised.
I do not know this person and this person does not know me. I logged on and searched my name...and at the top of the list was Alchemy mentioning me at this poem.
digipoet...it was a nice entrance to find this poem. I disagree with dropping the entire last line. How about Safety, as the last word? something that wraps it all up and binds it together...no pun intended.




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