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Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

Lie, cheat, and steal but spout proverbs with every step. Cover your hands with blood as you climb up that ladder. Just make sure you pray it all away. Condemn, judge, and manipulate. Make sure they all know your act; a successful man of the world all with Jesus hanging around your neck.

Engelbert Humpalot 3-Nov-06/5:14 AM
I am pleased I missed the previous version(s) - they must have sucked bigtime!




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