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Still (Free verse) by half.italian

I am building a home of glass. The memories are scarce, but feelings remain like blinking fate. You are strength in beauty. Right and left combined to smart and correct tastes. I remember the Eiffel Tower, proper in all of its proportions. I remember the music in us.

Dental Panic 2-Nov-06/2:58 PM
I don't care about your memories, I don't care about your taste, I don't care about your poem and I don't care about the explanation you gave - you're explaining your feelings. I don't care about your feelings. Being vague isn't poetic, it's boring, most of the time.




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