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Crappy (Free verse) by drnick

Light rain slides down the window Sky painted a sloppy gray And if you fool yourself You'll walk with smile on your face Slimy rock and dirt your path Not a friend along the way You know not to kid yourself In fear of looking lame All you can imagine is some life So boring, sober, sane No need to kill yourself If existence has gone to Frey Sure you could rewrite the world Would that make you happy? And if you'd fool yourself You'll find you became too sappy

drnick 17-Oct-06/8:42 PM
I do believe that they are, but I do not believe they "emerged somehow". That would imply that I believe that they once did not exist, which is not true. Like the universe, they have always existed and always will exist. They will exist whether the universe congregates into another "big bang" or if it expands infinitly forever. Perhaps this view is not very poetic, but then again neither is my poetry (zing!). May I ask as to what your opinion may be? I find it hard to less than no faith at all.




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