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Crappy (Free verse) by drnick

Light rain slides down the window Sky painted a sloppy gray And if you fool yourself You'll walk with smile on your face Slimy rock and dirt your path Not a friend along the way You know not to kid yourself In fear of looking lame All you can imagine is some life So boring, sober, sane No need to kill yourself If existence has gone to Frey Sure you could rewrite the world Would that make you happy? And if you'd fool yourself You'll find you became too sappy

Dovina 17-Oct-06/1:52 PM
You have gone beyond my request - by not only considering the cause’s cause, but by considering also reasons for the cause’s cause. You have considered whether any benefit derives from gravity, and have asked whether it is reasonable to apply “human qualities to something that is not human, not living, not material.” It’s like asking how these things came to be. It’s almost like asking who made them. But as an atheist, you do not ask that. Instead, you believe that they are, and emerged somehow. My faith is less than yours.




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