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My heart belongs to you (Free verse) by creepshow

All in all this tragedy pursues, this hatred inside me consumes. The darkened skies, hide my infinite lies. Inside, everyday my heart dies. All of this, this world of piss, conclude in me pass it to you. I can't write anymore, I just can't stand you whore... Forevermore, nevermore. Love to you is enslavement, I smash it to the pavement. Set my feelings aside, all alone, I have died.

drnick 14-Oct-06/10:38 AM
"Forevermore, nevermore."??????? I sense a severe lack of effort and just like love is enslavement, rhyming seems to have enslaved you.




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