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My heart belongs to you (Free verse) by creepshow

All in all this tragedy pursues, this hatred inside me consumes. The darkened skies, hide my infinite lies. Inside, everyday my heart dies. All of this, this world of piss, conclude in me pass it to you. I can't write anymore, I just can't stand you whore... Forevermore, nevermore. Love to you is enslavement, I smash it to the pavement. Set my feelings aside, all alone, I have died.

Dovina 13-Oct-06/3:41 PM
Lines like "infinite lies" tell us you have not yet settled upon what you want to say.




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