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Dead Inside (Free verse) by drnick

My soul must be iron: Forged in fire but currently cold, crushing. The weight intense With structure long rusting. Bringin' me down, Like an anchor Through the ground. I make not a sound, And feel nothing.

drnick 11-Oct-06/11:38 AM
really? thanks...I'm not sure I'm too impressed with it myself, but I'm glad you like it.




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