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Dead Inside (Free verse) by drnick

My soul must be iron: Forged in fire but currently cold, crushing. The weight intense With structure long rusting. Bringin' me down, Like an anchor Through the ground. I make not a sound, And feel nothing.

Lola 11-Oct-06/1:32 AM
Hmmm... very impressive writing... quite to the point and with adequate imagery. I like the title too.




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