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ReplyTo a comment on Weather Poem part 4: Cleaning Day by nypoet22.
Dovina4 Oct 2006 It's much stronger after the edit. I feel, now, that her leading him on is worse than lemon peel pinched in the eye, whereas before I wasn't sure. Something about making it perrsonal brings home the message.
Dovina4 Oct 2006