Dovina2 Oct 2006

I agree that it seems of uncertain intent, as if the the narrator is searching for some truth. The first verse seems to be about Jesus and his parables. He calls himslef the Door, and the narrator walks through.

Then in Verse 2, Narroator gets confused about something that the poem does not describe. I think it would be stronger if you say what confuses him.

Verse 3 is mostly a repeat of Verse 2 and brings us no closer to an understanding of the confusion.