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The Natural Course of Fear (Free verse) by half.italian

Begin by breathing in twos. Follow with a rasberry tingle. Complete only when parallel skeins run up and down.

half.italian 1-Oct-06/3:33 PM
It's trying to describe the phases that your body goes through when you feel fear. First you get short of breath, then you get an uncomfortable tingle (hair stands on end) then some kind of overwhelming force courses through your body.




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