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The Natural Course of Fear (Free verse) by half.italian

Begin by breathing in twos. Follow with a rasberry tingle. Complete only when parallel skeins run up and down.

half.italian 1-Oct-06/3:31 PM
I envisioned raspberry as a burn on your skin from scraping along the ground. It is uncomfortable and creates a scab. Not fun. I think I was reaching more with parallel skeins. Maybe it was just the connection with the word veins and skeleton that made it scary to me.




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