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In Vein (Free verse) by nentwined

enough with this self-dejection infection of lethargy melancholic YELLOW cholera dyspeptic -- I need an injection of that WATERCOLOR life with supranormal pigmentation of all the hues of the imagination; enough with this pragmatic fragmentation -- give me poetry (set me free to wander my veins) as it rains PURPLE ideas (to hurl exuberance) let me be (let me see) set me free!

livingcanvas 12-Sep-02/11:36 AM
i hate people that sit down with their thesaurus when writing. it's too easy to notice too, noone really speaks like this. i like your poem, but come on, stop trying to impress people and just write. 3




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