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Colors of Me (Other) by MissUnderstood

My emotions could paint you a rainbow. My feelings have much to say. My heart is red, my mood is blue. My thoughts are sort of gray. A kaleidoscope of colors. Raining brightly from within. Swirling round in circles. Trying to find where to begin. Yellow, green, and purple. Pink, brown, and even teal. All make a part of who I am. The part of me that's real.

<~> 29-Sep-06/1:27 PM
do you know about enjambement? it's a useful poetic device. this is an excellent start, but if you didn't end each line so suddenly, i think you could make this baby work overtime.




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