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Colors of Me (Other) by MissUnderstood

My emotions could paint you a rainbow. My feelings have much to say. My heart is red, my mood is blue. My thoughts are sort of gray. A kaleidoscope of colors. Raining brightly from within. Swirling round in circles. Trying to find where to begin. Yellow, green, and purple. Pink, brown, and even teal. All make a part of who I am. The part of me that's real.

LilMsLadyPoet 28-Sep-06/11:03 PM
oops...Typo>MAYBE you could find...
You are only 13?! Then...I should have voted even higher!...this is better than ALOT of stuff I have read here in the past. Keep writing, and listen to the help people offer you. You have much potential. You write much better than a majority of the stuff I was doing at your age. Want some advice? Save EVERYTHING you write..it gives you ideas, fresh things come to mind later when you read them, and it creates a scrapbook of sorts where you can see how you grow as a writer. I'm glad you are here...i will be checking in to see what else you come up with. Don't be sensitive to what people comment to you...there are alot of seasoned writers in here, and they can be rather honest in a blunt way. I hope you can appreciate honesty and gain whatever help and encouragement you need. Welcome!




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