poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Dovina Memorial Bike Lane by Dovina.

Dovina24 Sep 2006

I agree on putting “abused” at the front of a new line. I’ll look at rewarking some of the other verbs too. Changing the verbs to present tense, though, takes from the antiquated feeling I’m trying for. Picture a brass plaque set in a concrete monument beside the bicycle lane in downtown Carpinteria. I doubt if it will ever be there, but it should. Thanks for the comment and vote.