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Her Eyes (Sonnet) by Fayt

To the beauty that has been harnessed in your eyes, I write this ode to you. To their reflection of the stars of the night sky, To the coloring of their delicate brown hue. The grace contained within is nothing less than divine, They have made me realize god is real. Your eyes give off a unique radiant shine, No act of nature could craft the glow your eyes reveal. They proclaim your emotions for all to see, Shining forth with that same bright light. When your happy they sing in melody, Causing my passion to ignite. They have the ability to inspire love, That is a gift given only from above.

nypoet22 24-Sep-06/6:35 PM
love, from above? i know you're constrained by the sonnet form, but if i were you i'd scrap the last two lines and write something completely different. it almost sounds as if you just ran out of things to say and regressed to the least common denominator. push yourself!




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