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Love is just a word (Free verse) by trev086

Love is a word that doesn???t belong. Is it simple, meaningful, or just there to tag along? Love is a word that means way to much People misuse, the hearts are crushed. If you love wait for the day Which your heart will know when to say Love is a word that doesn???t belong It plays games in your head which can create a song. Pieces floating around like stars in the sky The use of the word will be a sparkle in your eye The one true feeling is the sensation of the heart So use it wisely and then you will never part. ~Trevor Greene

god'swife 12-Sep-02/9:30 AM
Love is a verb. The act of loving someone is far more noble and necessary than the sensation. Other than that, this poem is awkward at best. The rhymns are childish.




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