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a fresh start (Pimple) by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.

its amazing something so simple how it changes things the most valuable things a faint familiar feeling that certain one you’ve had it before but different i’ve said it before love a four letter word with a whole new meaning not yet just the beginning a miracle in the making? disaster in the waiting.. positive thinking great feelings flowing crazy thoughts exploding a fresh new start hope, faith, confidence

nypoet22 23-Sep-06/9:26 AM
instead of just telling people about the feelings, it might be helpful to try to show through concrete images how those feelings manifest themselves. right now the words are so completely vague i can't find anything to latch onto.




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