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Singing (Free verse) by ThereseWaneck

Sloshin' Singin'a dripping Tune rollin' Thunder drums Blows Rockin' Lightening strikes Crashin' A sweet sad song... Pickin' up the pitch Splashin' Nature sways An instrumental sweep Kickin' "groupies" Off thier feet... Slickly steppin' steppin' steppin, to the storm of the rain songs beat...

nypoet22 22-Sep-06/1:39 PM
on second look, "a sweet sad song" does sound a bit out of place.




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