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Fare Price (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

Let us not think about difficult things but let us find ways to ease our suffering. Let us not think of the nature of God. But let us sell His image and reputation for a fare price of course. Maybe write a book full of complaints arguing the state of trendy things and whether this and that is Christ-like. Maybe sell a shirt or a coat put a cross on it with some scripture. We’ll sell millions, but at a fare price of course. Let us not think of ourselves but let us think of His love and grace. Let us not just embrace that love and grace but sell it to the world for a fare price.

Ranger 19-Sep-06/8:05 AM
If I remember rightly, I quite liked the original. Decent enough edit, although I can never quite be sure whether you're religious or not.




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