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Hammered Nail (Free verse) by drjhoss

Pound, Pound! the nail is driven, once it goes in it is unmovable, It's life is chosen for it, The nail has no choice, It does not say which wood it prefers, Some nails are used earlier than others, Some nails are used later, and once in, the nail's job is done, Pound, Pound! the nail is driven into the coffin.

nentwined 10-May-02/9:07 PM
an interesting twist at the end, but I'm afraid this reads more like notes jotted down than a poem... (and It's == it is, its == possessive)




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