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Week End Justification (Free verse) by half.italian

Bones rubber a bit loose ends defray mind eases Sordid pleasures fly tipsy on my tongue but there is no one to hear Knowing that hollow ears would only see words, I will be Kong King of Thought.

half.italian 17-Sep-06/12:06 PM
hmmmm... Show me how the skyscraper and airplanes fit.

I worked on the "hollow ears" line for several hours and couldn't get it right. I tend to hide lack of skill behind vague, incomplete images. Does it make any sense?




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