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ReplyTo a comment on From Across the Line by Dovina.

nypoet2210 Sep 2006

i love this except the last line of the second to last stanza and first line of the last. i was really pining to see the poem close where it opened - if i may be so bold:

"tear down the foundations of my Rose Bowl!"
O Daughter of Disneyland, doomed to destruction,