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The Natural Course of Fear (Free verse) by half.italian

Begin by breathing in twos. Follow with a rasberry tingle. Complete only when parallel skeins run up and down.

half.italian 10-Sep-06/4:36 PM
Point taken. I'll try a few with a bit less abstraction.




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