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The Natural Course of Fear (Free verse) by half.italian

Begin by breathing in twos. Follow with a rasberry tingle. Complete only when parallel skeins run up and down.

Dovina 10-Sep-06/4:22 PM
Skeins of yarn are not parallel. Skeins of birds do not run up and down. It must be a sequence of events which run up and down,as opposed to something.
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