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Products of Pacifisim (Free verse) by Nuit

Products of pacifism In your plastic environments From your own warped conscience You call god science Evolution one man cried Logic built from his own warped pride In his town, his world Masks and fabrications Plastic propaganda Sell his manifestations. Grey scattered fragments Of the selfless lost, Idealistic fantasy Of the life you tossed Away that replaces green. Seen is the concrete jungle of urban man. Machine. Put into work long since To avoid mortal inconvenience. Products of pacifism In your fake optimism Plastic smiles, And twisted intuition Idealistic fantasies lie in wait, Plight of balanced few contemplate. 10000 years of spiritual philosophy 100 years to break an ideology. Evolution! One man cried, Typical monotony Of modern society. Vanity. T.V. shows end. Send more plastic fabrications To make our lives mend.

Ranger 9-Sep-06/12:33 PM
So are you saying that religious wars make for a more interesting life? That's what I'm taking from this poem.




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