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Limp Cock
(
Free verse
) by
Edna Sweetlove
Lying on the bed with his new lover he noticed to his astonishment that she had a large black wart just above her ***** with a long white hair protruding it was totally horrible to behold and his **** went l i m p . . . splat!
Ulterius
9-Sep-06/2:27 AM
The 'splat' at the end is a new addition, I believe, and a very good one, also. Amusing and repulsive.
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