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Let this world crumble to dust without you (Sonnet) by A_Dark_Calm

Let this world crumble to dust without you. For I cannot imagine such a world that exists without existing about you. Instead let this planet be promptly hurled into the sun and let the sun explode, consuming all the orbs in its fury and like this let the universe unfold and let it happen in a grateful hurry. Let everything there is soon disappear. Leave nothing but an endless quiet void. For like that void I am when you’re not here and nothing here for me can be enjoyed. But be with me my love and be my wife and I shall have a universe of life.

A_Dark_Calm 3-Sep-06/11:52 PM
I could shorten it but then it wouldn't be a sonnet.
Maybe a haiku?
World crashes into sun
The universe soon follows
still with you I live




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