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trained (Free verse) by calliope

Sweep down and gather the clouds in an aluminum bowl. Travel through the trellis where the vagrants have embellished the delicate, delicious cement with graffiti. Climb up the side of the Sears Tower. Wipe all the windows where widows were made after businessmen husbands were pimped at and paid. Then spend some time on the platform at night. Let a few trains pass before you ride. And take in the sights before you burrow beneath and disappear til your lonliness brings you back here.

Edna Sweetlove 29-Aug-06/7:37 AM
not very good - dreadful spelling and grammar. I'll be kind and give it 1/10.




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