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Watcher (Free verse) by creepshow

I took you in, So let me begin. After a while, things were fine... No one expected all you're lying. So now here I sit, I can't escape from this pit... I hear the phone calls, Breathing walls. I see your smile, It just isn't your coy little selfish style... Or was it, Am I a reflection of what you hate? A neverending escape... Always running from the truth, Into a moral outrage. Now as I sit from afar, I notice your car. I see you two together, Kissing like it's gone on forever. My erotic pain cleanses me, I like the pain infliction, Can't stop the self destructive addiction. I sit at home and wait for you, Listenting to another excuse. Well guess what dear, Lights out for you.

amanda_dcosta 22-Aug-06/6:52 AM
too melancholy and depressing.




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