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Unwanted Return (Free verse) by PawnedTidal

Is that you out there? Surely you wouldn't dare. After everything you did to me, Did you think I'd just let it be? I don't know what you want me to do, But I know I can't forgive you. I truly thought you were the one, But now I know to think that was dumb. I'd never felt a hurt before, Like I did when you walked out the door. And now you're trying to come back in? Well, I won't make that mistake again.

poetandknowit 11-Sep-02/9:38 PM
I swear I read this the first time when it was called Waking Up. Why don't you just make the one poem? Or maybe that wasn't what it was called, but it was another angry rant. Doesn't feeling hurt suck? Man, dude I feel it. Freakin women. Don't call her though!! Don't!!




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