poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Something More by drnick.

A db C11 Aug 2006

Soothingly introspective, the lines

You can only slow
a force of nature.
Like an avalanche
arrive in the chaos.

broke away from that soothing tone somewhat and whilst I see their necessity I cant precislely put my finger on it, but there is something that stops me giving this a 10 within those lines.