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Reflected, Dreamed (Free verse) by Frass

Rent, spurned spent, turned freshly cut and newly burned a shattering clack emitted, screamed echoes alone reflected, dreamed... refraction back enfolded, preened a merging moan from deep is gleaned harmonic swell is upward beamed a fragile life is held between.

royalflesh 11-Sep-02/9:01 PM
good turns, transitions, juxations. Upside down i read and see a meaning that is very, incredibly gleaming. Love it. Love it. 8/10




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