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Get Over It (Free verse) by drnick

no finer eye liner make-up, jeans designer I could try to find a minor to dig for my emotions but they're already on table emo = unstable look at my hair how I try not to care yet another corporate fad grow up and hug your dad

drnick 20-Jul-06/8:00 AM
Interesting that you assume I'm speaking of a girl. While it may seem that way, with the way "emo" kids look, I think it could be interpreted either way. I was assuming the role of the emo person who has the hair you speak of. Perhaps if I disconnected the last two lines it would be more apparent?




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