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Get Over It (Free verse) by drnick

no finer eye liner make-up, jeans designer I could try to find a minor to dig for my emotions but they're already on table emo = unstable look at my hair how I try not to care yet another corporate fad grow up and hug your dad

Dovina 17-Jul-06/2:38 PM
I like the rhyme, the brevity, and her eye-liner. What I don't get is whether the sloppy hair is yours or hers. Doesn't matter, I suppose, a fad is a silly fad.




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