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I hate making titles (Free verse) by drnick

Shadows fall like darkness crawls. These trees, it seems, are growing tall. If fire finds these timbered lines who will defend these massive halls? Not God, not man will be at hand to answer the crackling calls.

CherokeeRoseLoggins 17-Jul-06/11:20 AM
Was this suppose to be about lightning? Because that is the picture that formed in my mind while reading this. Sounds like the way lightning does around ehre in real bad storms. If so, then this is a good write. But I do agree with Ranger as for the last two lines;

To answer all,
The crackling calls.




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