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To Athena (Free verse) by cleverdevice

Innumerable portraits fail to reveal The tranquility of a Greek goddess Whose rich brown eyes tenderly caress The deep held passions I can no longer conceal. As a smooth, spanned hand gently nurses mine Her softly spoken whisper engulfs my breath And slowly, slowly her lips liquid wealth Reaches out to embrace my mouth in kind.

Ranger 16-Jul-06/11:56 PM
Awesome, I'm envious of anyone soaking up the summer sun - as opposed to soaking up the UV rays of Tesco lighting. You should get in touch with some of the others though, we're footballing most weeks and your presence (not to mention that fine 'keeping) would be a marvellous addition. Are you on MySpace.com? That's as good a way as any of keeping up to date. Plus, it's going to take over the world in the future and I recommend being on the winning side...




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