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I hate making titles (Free verse) by drnick

Shadows fall like darkness crawls. These trees, it seems, are growing tall. If fire finds these timbered lines who will defend these massive halls? Not God, not man will be at hand to answer the crackling calls.

ALChemy 13-Jul-06/6:45 PM
This is a good description. If it was a metaphor for something it would be amazing but it seems to not be attached to any thing specific except a row of trees. Maybe a title like "State Park" or something would help give it more of a setting.




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