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Unfortunate Semen Incident (Limerick) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

There was a young girl from Milwaukee, Who liked to indulge in bukkake. One day, in the race, To come on her face, I slipped and reversed the hierarchy.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Sep-02/6:54 PM
From my point of view, it's "Milwaukee" that doesn't quite fit the rhyme. "Hierarchy" has a silent "r" when pronounced in the Queen's English.




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